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epigone? i certainly hold you were referring to the man in the poem, and not you, yourself. most likely, as that would make sense. for if you claimed yourself mediocore ...

this poem was relatively good, but there was a major sag in it: and how I love you my sweet guy! But love of you will never hinder you to ...

wow. your poetry is improving. it's like you're *sniff* all grown up. :cry: okay, i'm over that. best line: Although summer might coat my soul in rime rime. *shivers* image ...

There is a light that shines upon The floor, the fourth light, then The seventh. what? is there a point? i don't get it. Come, O gale. Please come. I ...

Their love like a whip excruciates me, "their love, like a whip, excruciates me" i didn't think the last stanza went with the rest of the poem. i mean, it ...

airy ending, but it fits. when i saw this poem was by you i yelled "stop writing so much!", but just because i'm not writing anything. jealous, i suppose. i ...

very good. it's delicate at first, and then takes on a more angry tone. it reflects her life well, though i suppose it could suit anyone. i adored the ending...absoultely ...

She had to go you know. --she had a to go, you know With stronger hues, Having got back the lent hues, replace a "hues" with "colors" or something otherwise..wow. ...

i don't really care about the subject of the poem because that isn't what i'm here for. i'm here to tell you that i'd like to see more poetic language ...

awkward lines: a sun on broken sea and it is no beguile. this paragraph is useless and redundant: go laugh it up i want you to please do so i ...

mine were the hands that held you down, that drowned you in a sea of night – mine were the hands that held you close, and let them hurt you. ...

it took me a while to understand it, but when i did i only had praise for it. i apologize for the crappy critique, but can only beg you to ...

the poem had beautiful imgagery, and the way you put words together...wow. but I was dizzy, and your pain left me breathless. but? why but? is it contridicting something? if ...

ok, this is wonderful. it just needs a bit trimming around the edges, i think. i'll try my best. first paragraph - you say six billion too much. get a ...

this was short, sweet and perfect. i loved the ending. i apologize, as i am usually a rather...or sort of...thorough critiquer, but this is so...good. fixédness *nods in understanding* great, ...